My Old Car
Five years ago, I possessed a splendid automobile. At that time, I had to choose that one, because that kind of an auto was already extinct. That vehicle's company had released new model to replace the old model. To own that vehicle, I had to look for it in the biggest market for used cars. When I had been cherished that vehicle for five-year, I had no trouble with an auto which made me feel pleasant. But an automobile was getting older and started breaking down. I also felt uncomfortable whenever a lot of people saw my vehicle because of it's red color. My shy personality made my friends unable to count on that I possessed such a bright red car. As you can see that I had some trouble with that auto, so I could have rare chance to change my new automobile. The most valuable thing that I choose an auto was what kind of color of an auto has. I prefer normal color and design to extraordinaire colors; therefore, my previous auto reminds me of how I got my brand-new automobile.
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I want to know what is your red color auto. I guess You have passionate heart inside your body. haha I liked your smooth sentences, and it was easy to read your writing.
ReplyDeleteI thought it might be very cool car!!
ReplyDeleteBut i think if u can write more sensory details it will be better~^-^
Just like you, i like some cars which have classic model but not newest model. Sometimes I just look forward can have a fancy old car which is really fasinating to me.
ReplyDeleteyou use variety vocabulary! nice writing and impressive too.
ReplyDeleteWow! A red car! What a sexy man! What kind of car did you bought? Benz? BMW? Audi? Or what else?
ReplyDelete"My shy personality made my friends unable to count on that I possessed such a bright red car."it is a little confuse me. if you describe more details about inside and outside of your car, i think it will be better.
ReplyDeleteoh, I'd like to see your red car~~~~~and I'd like to know about your car! more information^^
ReplyDeletei had a car in my country.. i really miss my car. do you have plan to buy car in U.S.?
ReplyDeleteI have a used car which named HONDA Accord 96s. My one is very old, so sometimes I really am afraid of my car. Last quarter I used to take a bus everyday...it was so tired... but now it is very convenient. Andrew, if you want to know some information about used cars, call me later~~^ㅡ^
ReplyDeleteOh my~~ Red one? If you wrote car name I could imagine your driving scene more easily. lol
ReplyDeleteGood Paragraph. Anywny Ryans used car is the best (He always gave me a ride lol)
Although it is old , you will appreciate it for your fist car. Good description of your emotion.
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