Tuesday, January 19, 2010
My Ring
I have one most cherished ring out of the several I possess which I got a ring on my 22nd birthday from my mom. She took me to department jewelry stores a few days before my birth day. The ring fascinated me at once among many kinds of various beautiful rings. The band consists of shiny 14-karat white gold, and there is an oblique shape of a capital D on the top of the ring; in addition, there are many zircons, which look like diamonds, on both sides and the middle of the D of facing up. Also, there is a link which is connected with small flower, star-shaped decorations. I usually put my beautiful ring on my right fourth finger since I have gotten it except some days when I left it at home. It makes me feel like my mom is guarding me, so I am safe and comfortable. One day, I went to the piano practice room of the music college. When I had a big gap between two classes, I played piano. As I did before, I put my ring with a little tinkle sound on the piano. Oh my god! How could it happen to me! I completely forgot my ring after practice. I thought I was really stupid. I was just embarrassed and worried because maybe someone had already taken it. I stopped a taxi and took it back to the school, and I called my friend maybe who would be at school, but he was not there. I ran toward the room as soon as I arrived at school, and I tried to look for it in the room, but I couldn’t find it. However, suddenly a girl asked my name, and she gave me the ring that made me almost cry. Finally, I was relieved, and I never want to lose my ring again.
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Hi Jiyoun, good paragraph, but maybe r conclusion is not strong. it's just for your experience not for the article. I think u can write a really strong one.
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Hi Ji-youn, I got extremely interested from your paragraph about your ring. what you described was a little bit bored until the story was getting more interesting by the minute. Anyway, I'm really anxious to see your precious ring.
ReplyDeleteI see you are always wearing your ring.
ReplyDeleteI can know now that how important it is to you!
The famous "D ring"! I wander is it the product by Dior? By the way, your name is interesting to pronounce, Jiyoun.
ReplyDeletei have seen your ring before. i think it is very complicate, and it is very difficult to describe but you did very well.goog job!
ReplyDeleteI never seen your ring! i wanna see that!
ReplyDeletehaha, you found your ring finally. This is a happy ending . Actually, this like a story and makes me want to know the end of your essay and keep reading it.
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