Tuesday, January 19, 2010

My Mechanical Pencil - Bobby, Son

My mechanical pencil has been one of my most valuable possessions ever since I bought it. When I finished my military service three years ago, I bought my mechanical pencil that was just twenty dollars but it became my valued possession. Of course some people think that the most expensive thing is best treasure, but I don’t think so. There are two reasons why I choose my mechanical pencil as my favorite possession. The first reason is that the pencil is always there whenever I study something such as English, Math or Mechanics in my major and achieve successful results using my mechanical pencil. I got a high score on the TOEIC test and took full marks on all of my major subjects. Actually nobody may believe that my mechanical pencil made all of my achievements, but I think that my mechanical pencil helps me able to get successful results. Second, it is so comfortable for me to use my mechanical pencil. I had been tired and didn’t study long time when I used another mechanical pencil. Although the color of my pencil is just black and has a little white on top of it so, doesn’t look good. However it is very convenient to grab so, I am not tired and can concentrate on my study in a lot of time. Sometimes my friends say to me that my pen is so old and should get a new one. I know that my pen has been used for long time and has many scratches but I also don’t think appearance is important. My mechanical pencil is better for me than any other new pens. For this reason I never change to a new one, despite what my friends said. In conclusion, I have obtained so many unbelievable nice results since I have used the propelling pen for 3 years. Moreover I always feel comfortable when I use my pen. Therefore I am totally able to tell anyone my propelling pencil is my most cherished possession.

8 comments:

  1. i can see why you loved your mechanical pencil so much but i only know it has black color, many scratches, and a little white on the top of it, that's it! i would like to know more about what's it looks like.

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  2. Wow,very interesting paragraph// You are really cherishing your mechanical pencil. I always lost my pen as soon as I bought it. I deeply have to have time for self-reflection

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  3. BOb!!
    why did you put your wrting first...
    last comment!!
    huuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. I like your writing
    kind of professional!

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  4. i believe you can get lucky from you pencil. at same time, i think you are a good student who can get a high result in you tests! fighting!

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  5. Bobby,I can tell you have a clearly logical thinking reflected from your paragraph structure! You gave reasons and specific details to support why you like this unique pencil so much. As others commented, if you describe more clearly about the pencil's looking, readers can be more confirmed of your passion about this pencil.

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  6. Hello Bobby. I always like to read your writing. What a proficient and experienced paragraph~! I wish to come to know your detailed description technique.

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  7. booby always tells a lot of specific details even it is a tiny pencil! your essay said that you always use it; it just like your "rabbit foot"!

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